Well, this week could have been my un-doing...then I remembered Sosie's and my mantra lately. You almost stumped me INKPAPERPEN! After losing both of our sisters this year, MySarah and I are thinking of having this made into funky t-shirts. It's a down day today so this seems appropriate. DING!
Write On Wednesdays Exercise 13 - A Great
One Liner...This week you need to come up with one good line to
describe a part of your day. It can be 'real life' or fiction. But it must tell
us 'who did what'. It has to be an amazing line, like a tiny little paper plane
that must travel a big distance (figuratively speaking) with only a few folds
... Every word in that line must earn its place, or be cut as excess baggage.
Let's get thinking about each sentence as though every word counts, like working
one group of muscles to show how much weight they can carry.
Some day, not today, this all will suck less.
So simple, yet tells such a great story. I love how blunt this line is. Nice job.
ReplyDeleteGreat pick-me-up!
ReplyDeleteThere have been times when this thought is what has got me through. I get it. Love you.
ReplyDeletePerfect, simple and to the point yet really conveys the emotion behind it. Nice work.
ReplyDeleteI hear you. Great work xxx
ReplyDeleteThis is my mantra for today! Thanks for saying it so simply yet powerfully :)
ReplyDeleteThat's a teeshirt I would buy! I loved the simplicity of these everyday words that speak volumes and are accessible to everyone - more writing should be like this!
ReplyDeleteTo the point, Jaimee. Lovin' it!
ReplyDeleteOne to remember on a bad day. Great mantra!
ReplyDeleteJaimee - you have a very clear voice, even in just a few words, this sounds like you! I hope you feel better soon, I am sorry today is a down day.
ReplyDeleteThis week was a challenge wasn't it? But thanks for rising to it. Here's to days that suck less!
Gill x
Please make that t-shirt, Jaimee. I would wear that fabulous one liner for sure. Love that fun photo - comedy 'staches rock.
ReplyDeleteI created the t-shirt on Zazzle. You can purchase it at http://www.zazzle.com/someday_sunflower_tshirt-235269826859209526
ReplyDeleteThanks everyone. You lift me up!